Errata

Revolution in The Valley [Paperback]

Errata for Revolution in The Valley [Paperback]

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The errata list is a list of errors and their corrections that were found after the product was released. If the error was corrected in a later version or reprint the date of the correction will be displayed in the column titled "Date Corrected".

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Version Location Description Submitted By Date submitted Date corrected
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Page 42
1st paragraph

Antoine de St-Exup?ry is misspelled as Antoine de St-Expurey :)

Tim Pietzcker  Sep 12, 2010  Sep 09, 2011
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Page 205
2nd line of 3rd paragraph

'fascimile' should be 'facsimile'.

Anonymous  Sep 10, 2009  Sep 09, 2011
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Page 161
4th paragraph

Fourth paragraph ("Well, let's say...") should start with a quotation mark.

Anonymous  Sep 07, 2009  Sep 09, 2011
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Page 35
first full paragraph

In the first sentence of the first full paragraph on page 35, the phrase "In May 1981" is repeated twice. The sentence should be either:

"In May 1981, Bud pulled an all-nighter and ported QuickDraw..."

or:

"Bud pulled an all-nighter in May 1981 and ported QuickDraw..."

Anonymous  Sep 06, 2009  Sep 09, 2011
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Page 133
5th line of 3rd paragraph

'elicting' should be 'eliciting'.

Anonymous  May 05, 2009  Sep 09, 2011
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Page 80
last line of 1dt paragraph

"Randy Wiggington" should be "Randy Wigginton".

This same error occurs in two other places (see index)

Anonymous    Sep 09, 2011
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Page 91
first line of last paragraph

All of the spaces are missing from the first line of the paragraph, it reads:

Theleftmostpictureshowsdifferent.

Anonymous    Sep 09, 2011
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Page 114
1st paragraph

"Roger van Oech"
should read:
"Roger von Oech"

Anonymous    Sep 09, 2011
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Page 122
2nd line of 2nd paragraph

"Haelerli" should be "Haeberli"

Anonymous    Sep 09, 2011
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Page 140
toward end of second paragraph

"Bill" should be "Bob"

"so Bill could further distance" should be "so Bob could futher distance", or,
perhaps preferably, "so he could further distance".

Anonymous    Sep 09, 2011
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Page 145
first line

"he just delivered the news it verbally"
should be
"he just delivered the news verbally"
- the word "it" should be deleted.

Anonymous    Sep 09, 2011
Printed
Page 148
last line of 1st paragraph

the phrase "for the icon pictured here" should be deleted, since it's an icon of
Bill, not Burrell. The sentence should end after "had him pose.".

Anonymous    Sep 09, 2011
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Page 191
4th line from bottom

there should be a period and a paragraph break after the first word "(API)". The new
paragraph should start with "I gradually..."

Anonymous    Sep 09, 2011
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Page 211
1st paragraph of second column, eighth line

weird superscript after "memory" should be eliminated.

Anonymous    Sep 09, 2011