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Chapter 15
Get feedback
on your drafts
from colleagues
Say you’ve drafted a budget request. Ask people on your
team to read it and make sure you’ve explained clearly,
concisely, and persuasively why you should receive the
funding, for example, to hire two more staff members.
And if possible, get constructive feedback from an objec-
tive peer in a different department—preferably someone
who is good at lobbying for resources.
Pay attention to what your colleagues say: Their re-
actions will probably be quite close to those of your in-
tended readers.
Accept suggestions graciously
A good writer welcomes good edits—yearns for them, in
fact. A bad writer resents them, seeing them only as per-
sonal attacks. A good writer has many ideas and tends
to value ...